Summary Reader Response #1
In the article “The Self-Healing Concrete…” Spinks (2015)
stated that Hendrik Jonkers, a microbiologist at Delft University, has
innovated self-healing concrete and discussed whether the industry is keen on
picking up the technology. This technology works by embedding 'self-activating
limestone-producing bacteria into building material', thus lowering maintenance
and repair costs for buildings. However, Spinks mentions that the innovation
cannot cure 'wide cracks or potholes on roads' as the technology is only
limited for cracks up to 0.8mm wide. A cubic-meter of it also costs €100 as
opposed to the standard €70. These disadvantages would be reason enough for the
industry to shun the use of such technology. According to Spinks, John Alker,
director of policy at the UK Green Building Council, believes that flaunting
the benefits of new green technology would make its adoption successful, albeit
acknowledging the stubbornness of the construction industry in adopting new
ideas. Spinks said that Jonkers acknowledges this problem, and after doing a
concrete-canal project in Ecuador, he was optimistic that the industry will
come to see the benefit of his innovation. Based on the points made in the
article, it constantly mentions the high price of the self-healing concrete.
However, it fails to elucidate that the high price of the self-healing concrete
is due to the technology being in its infancy and the lack of adoption and mass
production of the product itself.
Even though it is a very promising development, the
technology for self-healing concrete is still in its relative infancy, and it
has a lot of work to do before it becomes a viable and reasonable economical
choice for construction companies "Self-healing concrete..." (2019). Due to there being limited research on the technology,
it costs significantly lesser to produce normal concrete compared to its
self-healing variant. Bacteria, agents and materials needed to concoct the self-healing
concrete would cost higher as these items are not easily found on the market.
As the technology is still relatively new, it can only cure cracks up to 0.8mm
wide. This gives self-healing concrete limited usage, which only serves to
further drive up its production costs. Due to this, the technology has not
garnered widespread adoption, which brings us to our next point.
The severe lack of adoption (Shannon, 2015) and lack of
mass production (Damian, 2011) of the product is one of the causes of the high
prices of self-healing concrete, which the article did not elaborate on. The
technology is a long shot from becoming a sustainable alternative to concrete
as of now. However, as the technology advances, this will see an increase in
adoption of the product "Self-healing concrete..."(2019). As the technology evolves, it can be introduced to more
complex structures, thus stimulating construction companies to further adopt
this technology. If this happens, we would see self-healing concrete being
produced on an industrial scale, which would drastically bring down the cost of
self-healing concrete (Damian, 2011).
From the reasons and explanations stated, the price of
self-healing concrete is high not due to its intrinsic values, but due to
reasons stated above. I feel that the article failed to mention these points,
and thus gave a negative light to self-healing concrete due to its high cost. Self-healing
concrete would be a sustainable and viable replacement for concrete in the
future, and I felt that the article unnecessarily amplified the issue of cost
in adopting the technology.
References
Arnold, D. (2011, March). Articles -
self-healing concrete. Retrieved February 15, 2021, from
https://www.ingenia.org.uk/Ingenia/Articles/eb2f64de-2493-4dfc-9adc-3ae8e13ca477
Moneo, S. (2017, November 02). Dutch scientist
Invents self-healing concrete with bacteria - constructconnect.com. Retrieved
February 15, 2021, from
https://canada.constructconnect.com/joc/news/infrastructure/2015/09/dutch-scientist-invents-self-healing-concrete-with-bacteria-1010047w
Self-healing concrete – the friendly bacteria
that fixes cracks. (2019, January 23). Retrieved February 15, 2021, from
http://useofcement.cembureau.eu/2019/01/23/self-healing-concrete-friendly-bacteria-fixes-cracks/
Spinks, R. (2015, June 29). Sustainable business.
Retrieved February 15, 2021, from
https://www.theguardian.com/sustainable-business/2015/jun/29/the-self-%20healing-concrete-that-can-fix-its-own-cracks
Thank you for the very good effort, Iskandar. You have a clear, concise, and appropriate summary and a clear thoughtful thesis. For the response, you've done effective research and have lots of good ideas. Overall, you do a fine job supporting your thesis in the body pararaphs. There are a few problems though, including the lack of enough referencing in the essay and some issues in the reference list itself. Let's talk about this.
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