Summary Reader Response Draft #4
In the article “The Self-Healing Concrete…” Spinks (2015) stated that Hendrik Jonkers, a microbiologist at Delft University, has innovated self-healing concrete and discussed whether the industry was keen on picking up the technology. This technology works by embedding 'self-activating limestone-producing bacteria into building material', thus lowering maintenance and repair costs for buildings (Spinks, 2015) . However, Spinks mentioned that the innovation could not cure 'wide cracks or potholes on roads' as the technology was only limited for cracks up to 0.8mm wide. Spinks added that a cubic-meter of SHC also cost €100 as opposed to the standard €70. These disadvantages would be reason enough for the industry to shun the use of such technology. According to Spinks, John Alker, director of policy at the UK Green Building Council, believed that flaunting the benefits of new green technology would make its adoption successful, albeit acknowledging the stubbornness of the construction industry in adopting new ideas. Spinks said that Jonkers acknowledged this problem, and after doing a concrete-canal project in Ecuador, he was optimistic that the industry would come to see the benefit of his innovation. The points made in the article constantly mentioned the high price of the self-healing concrete. Spinks consistently highlighted and gave strong emphasis on the high price of SHC. However, at the same time, it fails to elucidate that the high price of the self-healing concrete was due to the technology being in its infancy and the lack of adoption and mass production of the product itself.
One of the areas that was not explained when Spinks discussed about the
high price of SHC was that self-healing concrete is still in its relative
infancy*, and proponents have a lot of work to do before it becomes a
viable and reasonable economical choice for construction companies (Cembureau, 2019). Compared
to the self-healing version, normal concrete costs considerably less to
manufacture. Bacteria, agents and materials needed to concoct the self-healing
concrete would make the cost of it higher. As the technology is still
relatively new, it can only cure cracks up to 0.8mm wide (Spinks, 2015). This
gives self-healing concrete limited usage, which only serves to further drive
up its production costs. Due to the aforementioned reasons, the
technology has not garnered widespread adoption. As it is not well known and is
in its infancy, SHC is produced in smaller batches and is not in mass
production, making its cost inevitably higher
Two other causes of the high prices of self-healing concrete, which the
article did not expand on are the extreme lack of acceptance (Shannon, 2017)
and lack of mass production (Damian, 2011) of the commodity. As the
technology has not been adopted by the industry, the production cost of SHC
will remain sky-high. This is evident from the low market size of SHC only
valuing itself at USD 24.60 billion (“Self healing concrete market,” 2019). As
of now, the technology is a long way from becoming a sustainable alternative to
concrete. However, as the technology advances, this will see an increase in
adoption of the product ("Self-healing concrete,"2019). With
time, the technology can be introduced to more complex structures and
extreme environments, thus stimulating construction companies to
further adopt this technology ("Self-healing concrete,"2019).
The compound annual growth rate (CAGR) of SHC is also expected to by 37% from
2019 to 2027 (“Self healing concrete market,” 2019). If this happens, we would
see self-healing concrete being produced on an industrial scale, which would
drastically bring down the cost of self-healing concrete (Damian, 2011).
In conclusion, the price of self-healing concrete is high not due
to its intrinsic values, but due to reasons stated above. I feel that the
article failed to mention these points, and thus gave an unfair assessment
of self-healing concrete, as the author kept emphasising on its high cost.
Self-healing concrete would be a sustainable and viable replacement for concrete
in the future, if and only if the issues surrounding it were to be
resolved.
(662 words)
References
Cembureau. (2019, January 23). Self-healing concrete – the friendly bacteria
that fixes cracks. http://useofcement.cembureau.eu/2019/01/23/self-healing-concrete-friendly-bacteria-fixes-cracks/
*Damian, A. (2011, March). Self-healing
concrete. Ingenia. https://www.ingenia.org.uk/Ingenia/Articles/eb2f64de-2493-4dfc-9adc-3ae8e13ca477
Self-healing Concrete Market Size
& Share Report, 2020-2027. (2020, October).
https://www.grandviewresearch.com/industry-analysis/self-healing-concrete-market.
Shannon, M. (2017, November 02). Dutch
scientist Invents self-healing concrete with bacteria. Journal of
Commerce. https://canada.constructconnect.com/joc/news/infrastructure/2015/09/dutch-scientist-invents-self-healing-concrete-with-bacteria-1010047w
Spinks, R. (2015, June 29). The
self-healing concrete that can fix its own cracks. Ingenia. https://www.ingenia.org.uk/Ingenia/Articles/eb2f64de-2493-4dfc-9adc-3ae8e13ca477
Hi Isqandar,
ReplyDeleteYour summary reader response draft #4 entailed an evident thesis. The ideas your provide is supported strongly with your secondary research articles. However you would like to take note of the point below in your next writing exercises.
1. Punctuations and verbs: “produced in smaller batches and is not in mass production, making its cost inevitably higher” > “… and not in mass productions, making its cost inevitably higher.”
Here you missed a fullstop at the end of the sentence and mentioned “.. and is not in mass production,”. This could have been written as “and not in mass production”.
2. Repetitive ideas within a sentence: “SHC is produced in smaller batches and is not in mass production,” > I thought here that small batches did meant that is wasn’t being mass produced yet, so I found that having “mass production” in the sentence was a little redundant as they both project the same idea and sounded repetitive.
3. In your conclusion, you could go straight to the point and improve the sentence to:
- “In the article, the author emphasised its high cost and failed to mention these points, which gave an unfair assessment of self-healing concrete.”
4. When reiterating points you could also write “Self-healing concrete would be a sustainable and viable replacement of concrete in the future, on the condition that the aforementioned issues are resolved.”
There is still room for improvement in keeping the reader response concise. Nonetheless I appreciate your efforts in injecting words like “flaunting the benefits, albeit acknowledging, proponents, concoct, commodity, intrinsic” which captured my attention. Overall, this has been an insightful and interesting read.
Wishing you all the best!
Best regards,
Syakirah